I don’t know if this is appropriate for this community or not, and I apologize if it isn’t.

I’m a leftist amateur writer who has been world-building a science fantasy socialist/communist society for use in roleplaying and potential future story writing. Basically, a communist nation of animals who have cast aside predator-prey relationships. The characters are animals simply because I like animals, but it could also represent the fact that prehistoric hunter-gatherer tribes are thought of as communist (symbolized by the fact that animals are thought of as being closer to nature). Here are my writings:

The society itself: https://old.reddit.com/r/fantasywriters/comments/iy5jmh/the_unified_territories_a_nation_of_intelligent/

My main character: https://old.reddit.com/r/scifiwriting/comments/k91k13/yvonne_dandelionpaw_the_chemist_cat/

I would appreciate feedback, especially in terms of whether this is actually communism.