• selokichtli
    6·
    1 year ago

    I would have them actually stepping on the mime, make the hat appear under the foot. That last frame could work without the mime, just the dismembered bodies laying around. But overall, I liked it, OP. It’s absurd funny. Thanks for sharing.

    • lmaydev@lemmy.world
      5·
      1 year ago

      Yeah I think a foot on a hat would make a good frame for the triggering.

      The mime’s expression in the last one is great though.

    • CustardFist@feddit.nlOP
      2·
      1 year ago

      Thanks for the detailed analysis. It has been a long time since anyone took the time to take a good look at my comics and then comment about it. I’m glad you liked it. :ر

      • selokichtli
        2·
        1 year ago

        Well, it’s easy to say “I would have…” when my drawing skills are close to none, but I’ve enjoyed two of your comics shared recently in this community. Great work.

        • CustardFist@feddit.nlOP
          2·
          1 year ago

          Sure. It’s easy, but I don’t mind a little critique if it’s well formulated. :ر

          Anyway, stick around for more comics. I have three years worth of backlog to post on this platform. Laterz! Bر

          • Dharma Curious@startrek.website
            2·
            1 year ago

            That’s so cool! I have the drawing capabilities of your average pool noodle. I’m always so jealous of people who can create visually what they see in their mind.

            You’re a very talented person. I look forward to seeing more.

            • CustardFist@feddit.nlOPEnglish
              2·
              1 year ago

              Thank you, thank you! If you stroke my ego any harder, we might get arrested. ;ط

              This sounds cliché as hell, but even you can draw. Just practice observing, drawing what you observe and not caring too much if you ‘fail’. Bر

              • Dharma Curious@startrek.website
                2·
                1 year ago

                I’ve been told I stroke particularly well, but I’m better at verbalizing. ;)

                I’ve tried quite a lot, but I just don’t have a steady hand. I’ve been thinking about trying to do it digitally, since I may be able to fix some mistakes that way, but I don’t know how realistic that is. Lol.

                • CustardFist@feddit.nlOPEnglish
                  2·
                  1 year ago

                  Well, I don’t have a steady hand either. In my comics you’ll never find a straight line. I made it my style more or less out of necessity, haha. Xط