• selokichtli
    6·
    1 year ago

    I would have them actually stepping on the mime, make the hat appear under the foot. That last frame could work without the mime, just the dismembered bodies laying around. But overall, I liked it, OP. It’s absurd funny. Thanks for sharing.

    • lmaydev@lemmy.world
      5·
      1 year ago

      Yeah I think a foot on a hat would make a good frame for the triggering.

      The mime’s expression in the last one is great though.

    • CustardFist@feddit.nlOP
      2·
      1 year ago

      Thanks for the detailed analysis. It has been a long time since anyone took the time to take a good look at my comics and then comment about it. I’m glad you liked it. :ر

      • selokichtli
        2·
        1 year ago

        Well, it’s easy to say “I would have…” when my drawing skills are close to none, but I’ve enjoyed two of your comics shared recently in this community. Great work.

        • CustardFist@feddit.nlOP
          2·
          1 year ago

          Sure. It’s easy, but I don’t mind a little critique if it’s well formulated. :ر

          Anyway, stick around for more comics. I have three years worth of backlog to post on this platform. Laterz! Bر