• UlyssesT [he/him]@hexbear.net
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    3 months ago

    I wonder if you could do a sort of conditionally-unreliable narrator where from a character’s POV they almost reveal their secret but not quite for the reader, and then when it shifts out, it can still be a surprise when it’s finally delivered.

    Secrets pay off best, usually, when they’re from someone else’s POV when they finally are revealed than the secret-haver.