So I made this cover letter and thought it showed I’d be dedicated to their field and wanting to learn. While have experience and schooling in certain fields that may benefit their business. Then that I am really good with customers?

Though I showed my mom and grandma. My mom owns a photography business and my grandma used to do interviews for churches. My grandma said that it is absolutely amazing and perfect. While my mom simply just say don’t use it but literally won’t give any explanation into her thought process… so please can anyone let me know, would this be good to use for a job application or to take into the interview?

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    4 months ago

    The advice I’ve gotten for cover letters: summarize how your accomplishments align with the most important requirements of the job description. It should be supported by the resume. You should match job description keywords as closely as you can without lying. Focus on measurable outcomes, in your CL and resume. Could be simple things like approximate number of customers helped per day. Best of luck!