• BarqsHasBite@lemmy.world
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    5 months ago

    Writing one sentence per paragraph.

    Does not make you profound.

    Or convince anyone of anything.

    All it does is make it impossible to read.

    And take up a lot of space.

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      5 months ago

      That’s not a haiku.

      Having one sentence per line.

      Does not profound make.

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          5 months ago

          To write true haiku

          One must practice inner peace

          True haiku is calm