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I feel that this photograph could have been improved by a stronger subject, rather than a woman looking at her phone. Maybe even an additional layer of interest. Here are some shots that could inspire you in a similiar mix of interesting structures and people behind bars/fences (hopefully these inspire to make even better photos!):

Ernst Haas

Gueorgui Pinkhassov

Harry Gruyaert

Alex Webb

Viktor Kolar