• sci@feddit.nl
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    1 year ago

    I asked chatgpt to rewrite it:

    Leveraging a comprehensive understanding of luminary technologies and operational procedures, I successfully orchestrated the replacement of an incandescent illumination unit, thereby ensuring the unimpeded continuation of a well-lit environment conducive to productivity and safety. This process entailed the meticulous de-installation of the expired bulb, followed by the careful integration of a new luminary element, all while strictly adhering to established safety protocols, effectively demonstrating my prowess in problem-solving, attention to detail, and aptitude for equipment maintenance and upkeep.

  • colin@lemmy.uninsane.org
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    1 year ago

    bzzzt. “single-handedly” might be read as “not a team player”. talk about how you “led a team that performed the upgrade” instead, or if that’s not true, maybe you “worked with stakeholders” (i.e. you texted your roommate “i replaced the light btw”).